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[edit]Since another editor defended the questionable writing and unsourced claims, I'm adding why I changed them below:
About "along with those of Bill Paxton and Jenette Goldstein". Article only states: "Most of the cast was also praised, particularly Biehn, Goldstein, Henriksen, Henn and Reiser". As one can see, no point of highlighting Biehn and Goldstein when there are others mentioned with them.
As for the image: "Sigourney Weaver's performance as Ellen Ripley received critical acclaim (unsourced claim), earning her a nomination for the Academy Award for Best Actress. Her nomination was considered a milestone since the Academy paid little attention to science fiction films since its inception." This text is mentioned again in Accolades section, where it actually belongs: "Weaver's (pictured in 1989) Academy Award nomination for Best Actress was considered a milestone when the Academy paid little attention to science fiction." The editor insists on writing the same thing over and over with different pictures.
And lastly, "mostly rave reviews" is directly taken from the source, it's a verbatim quote. "generally positive reviews"
is actually an "interpretation"
of it. ภץאคгöร 13:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- Why have you posted the same discussion across two pages? I said remove Paxton and Goldstein if you wanted, just stop changing the rest. Generally positive reviews isn't an interpretation, it's a neutral statement, whereas your edit note said it should be interpreted as "critical praise". Generally positive and generally negative are the terms we tend to rely on because they're neutral. "Mostly rave" doesn't mean the same thing to every person. If you have an issue with text in the image, remove the text not the image? I didn't add the text or notice it but I know I don't need to remove the image to remove the text. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 14:06, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- My note didn't say that, I use directly from the source, not "generally positive", which is nowhere to be found in the ref. Why keep the image without text, even though Weaver's picture is already on the page? Should we fill the page with images that have no description? What empty excuses... ภץאคгöร 14:18, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- The image had and now has a different text. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 14:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- Just as a quick aside for everyone, the Reception section on most film articles uses somewhat standardized terminology - positive, negative, or (rarely) mixed. It's meant to be in Wikipedia's voice, so we wouldn't normally quote something like "mostly rave reviews" as the sum-up. NekoKatsun (nyaa) 14:55, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- The image had and now has a different text. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 14:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- My note didn't say that, I use directly from the source, not "generally positive", which is nowhere to be found in the ref. Why keep the image without text, even though Weaver's picture is already on the page? Should we fill the page with images that have no description? What empty excuses... ภץאคгöร 14:18, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
paul reiser deserves better than this
[edit]"Aliens was Reiser's first major theatrical role, following small parts in films like Beverly Hills Cop (1984)"
his part in BHC wasn't 'small', but never mind that- his first major role was in 'diner'.
duncanrmi (talk) 20:57, 18 September 2024 (UTC)
- The source quotes him as saying
"I'd done both Beverly Hills Cops, big films, but I was only a tiny part," he recalls. "Aliens was a whole new level that made me understand what it's like to be in a hit."
I see where you're coming from regarding his role in Diner; perhaps there's a better way to word this sentence? Any suggestions? NekoKatsun (nyaa) 22:46, 18 September 2024 (UTC)- Perhaps something like "Prior to Aliens, Reiser said he only had small roles in big budget films such as Beverly Hills Cops.? Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:00, 13 November 2024 (UTC)
Cast's billing order
[edit]The cast section has a debatable order that doesn't reflect neither the end credits billing nor the actual character's relevance. Vasquez is not an "also with", she's a major character with a distinctive look that survives through the final act. Whereas Frost doesn't even have much screen time and dies early. The end credits billing is as follows: Ripley, Newt, Hicks, Burke, Bishop, Hudson, Gorman, Vasquez, Apone, Drake, Frost, Ferro, Spunkmeyer, Dietrich, Crowe, Wierzbowski. Kumagoro-42 (talk) 03:54, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's per the opening billing, the end credits is just a list, where is the cut off? Where we determine who stops being important? Following the opening billing is fair, it shouldn't be based on whom we deem important. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 10:48, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
- Basically agreed with DWB. If we measured it strictly by screen time, it would suggest someone who is killed in Aliens right away is less important, but I don't think it can be boiled down to basic math. Generally, while not a rule, I try to apply a cast based on the scale of the article, and I sort of ask myself (do I mention this character regularly in the plot? do I mention this character in the production? do I mention them in the reception?) The kind of helps put real world values into the weight. Not a wiki rule, but maybe something that would help persuade others for something that feels appropriate in terms of wiki rules. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:38, 20 December 2024 (UTC)
Edit War Brewing
[edit]It appears that DarkWarriorBlake is attempting to subvert any edits to the plot summary. After reviewing the Edit History, he has continuously reverted any editor's changes. This shows a pattern of protection and a sense of "ownership." The previous plot summary was overly long and riddled with unnecessary details, unimportant links, and overall weak prose. Per Wiki requirements, move summaries are supposed to be brief and only cover main plot points, not describe every scene/sequence in the film, list every technical aspect, describe the scenery, etc. PNW Raven (talk) 18:42, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- For context, here's the current version and the previous version. So, which version should we use? Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 18:45, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- That's like, just your opinion, man. I did 2 reverts and you have immediately gone bad faith in accusing me of ownership, which is unbecoming of someone who has been here as long as you. Additionally, there are multiple editors reverting in the edit history because it's typically a target for poor edit quality or vandalism, cherry picking my edits is not a solid foundation for an argument. Featured Articles are held to a higher standard for large scale changes, so if your reversion is challenged, then you are to open a discussion. That's ignoring the basic common courtesy of WP: BRD, so you are currently violating multiple guidelines because you prefer your version, and you're WP: EDITWARRING over it. Maybe take a cooler head, undo your reversion, and come here to discuss. I was willing to talk to you and mediate on possible changes, you do not seem to be amenable to any kind of collaboration? Just bruce force? Darkwarriorblake (talk) 18:51, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- No strong opinion either way, however I will say marine is not a proper noun and shouldn't be capitalised unless it's specifically US Colonial Marines or the like. Yes in the current world the USMC style guide capitalises it, and it's commonly used in that context, but these are not the USMC and just referring to the marines or a marin should not be capitalised. You don't capitalise sailors, soldiers, airmen etc. Canterbury Tail talk 18:55, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- Canterbury Tail, so should corporal and private also not be capitalized? Darkwarriorblake (talk) 19:26, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- Captialised when it's being used in a title, but not as a rank. i.e. Corporal Hicks is capitalised, but not Hicks is a corporal. It's fine for Private Drake, but not the private. Canterbury Tail talk 19:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- Canterbury Tail, so should corporal and private also not be capitalized? Darkwarriorblake (talk) 19:26, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- No strong opinion either way, however I will say marine is not a proper noun and shouldn't be capitalised unless it's specifically US Colonial Marines or the like. Yes in the current world the USMC style guide capitalises it, and it's commonly used in that context, but these are not the USMC and just referring to the marines or a marin should not be capitalised. You don't capitalise sailors, soldiers, airmen etc. Canterbury Tail talk 18:55, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- You didn't wait to discuss. You just immediately did a revert and dismissed any attempt to improve the article. It's not required to discuss improvements that does not radically change the nature of the article. And I do see a pattern of you immediately reverting other editor's improvements. PNW Raven (talk) 18:58, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, per the aforementioned criteria and WP: STATUSQUO I reverted to the last stable version. What you may consider other's improvements clearly weren't, since I reverted them or others did, and noone put them back. As you'll no doubt have noticed, in the last 18 months of edits there are no notes in the summaries regarding Edit Warring, so your stance does not seem to hold a great deal of water. As mentioned, this is a Featured ARticle and a heavily monitored one at that due to the film's popularity, so non-constructive edits are removed fairly fast. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 19:03, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- FYI i have placed an edit warring warning on PNW's page, as he's now reverted a separate editor. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 19:15, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- A "separate" editor? I suspect someone you recruited or an additional account. PNW Raven (talk) 19:43, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- Are you seriously making the accusation that myself and @NekoKatsun: are sock or meat puppets? I think you may have gotten a little too invested in this for now and should walk away for a bit. Canterbury Tail talk 19:44, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- Jeezy creezy I'm a tiny little infant baby editor compared to you two! NekoKatsun (nyaa) 19:52, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- That's a fairly unfair accusation against two long-term editors and hard working contributors. As I said, Aliens is a very highly monitored article due to its popularity. Plus you will see the odd fight between myself and Canterbury Tail (a long time ago) which would be pretty elaborate setup for a sock. Darkwarriorblake (talk) 20:06, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
- I prefer the term "creative disagreement". Canterbury Tail talk 20:08, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
If no one minds, and this might make it easier to discuss anyways, I've put together both versions and what I'd suggest for each paragraph. Thoughts? NekoKatsun (nyaa) 20:15, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
A comparison
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